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贸易额趋势

Trade Value Trends
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📝 题目

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

贸易额趋势

✍️ 参考范文

The three line charts illustrate Australia’s trade values (in billions of Australian dollars) with China, Japan, and the US in terms of imports and exports over the period 2004 to 2009. Overall, trade with China saw the most substantial growth in both imports and exports, making China Australia’s most significant trading partner by the end of the period. In contrast, trade volumes with Japan and the US were more stable, with Japan having a trade surplus for Australia while the US was the only country where imports consistently exceeded exports. In 2004, Australia’s imports from China stood at 20 billion AUD and rose steadily to 31 billion by 2008, before plateauing in 2009. Exports to China grew more dramatically, from around 13 billion to over 35 billion, surpassing imports by 2009. For trade with Japan, exports started at 20 billion, peaked at 41 billion in 2008 then fell slightly to 33 billion in 2009, while imports grew slowly from 20 billion to a high of 25 billion in 2008 before dropping back to 20 billion. Trade with the US was the lowest overall. Imports remained between 21 and 25 billion, peaking in 2008, while exports grew marginally from 8 billion to a peak of 16 billion in 2008 then declined to 11 billion by 2009.

开头段
将题目原句改写,替换同义表达:show替换为illustratevalue in Australian dollars明确为trade values (in billions of Australian dollars),明确图表维度是进出口额。
雅思小作文采用标准结构:开头段改写题目,概述段总结核心趋势,细节段分国别描述具体数据并做对比。
概述段
提炼3个核心整体特征:① 中澳贸易增长最显著,期末成为最大贸易伙伴;② 日、美贸易更平稳;③ 对日本为贸易顺差(出口>进口),对美国始终为贸易逆差(进口>出口),对中国从逆差转为顺差。概述段不加入具体数据,只总结宏观趋势。
细节段
按照贸易规模从高到低(中国→日本→美国)的顺序描述,分别说明进口、出口的起止值、峰值、变化趋势,同时对比进出口关系。
中国
进口2004年200亿澳元(注:图单位是billion即十亿,此处纠正单位表述:2004年进口200亿?不对,纵轴是A$ Billion,所以2004年中国进口是20 billion即200亿,2008年310亿,2009年300亿左右;出口2004年130亿,2009年360亿左右,2009年出口超过进口。
日本
进出口2004年均为200亿,出口2008年峰值410亿,2009年330亿;进口2008年峰值250亿,2009年回到200亿,全程出口高于进口。
美国
贸易额最低,进口210-250亿区间波动,出口80亿起步,2008年峰值160亿,2009年110亿,全程进口高于出口。
衔接与逻辑
使用Overall, In contrast, In 2004, while, For trade with Japan等逻辑连接词,保证段落间、句子间衔接流畅,覆盖了所有核心特征:增长趋势、峰值、进出口对比、国别间的规模差异。