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茶和咖啡进口

Tea and Coffee Imports
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📝 题目

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart compares the import volumes of tea and coffee (measured in tonnes) across four nations: Canada, the US, the UK, and Germany.

Overall, the UK imported the largest amount of tea by a significant margin, while Germany had the highest coffee import quantity among the four countries. It is also noticeable that Canada and the US showed very similar import patterns for both beverages, with coffee imports doubling tea imports in both countries.

In detail, UK tea imports reached 80,000 tonnes, far exceeding those of Germany (41,000 tonnes), the US (21,000 tonnes) and Canada (20,000 tonnes), which all had much lower tea import levels. However, the UK’s coffee imports stood at 30,000 tonnes, the lowest figure for coffee among the four nations.

By contrast, Germany imported the most coffee, at 50,000 tonnes, followed closely by the US and Canada, both of which imported around 40,000 tonnes of coffee. Both the US and Canada imported roughly 20,000 tonnes of tea, less than half of their coffee import volumes.

审题阶段
首先明确图表类型为柱状图,主题是四个国家(加拿大、美国、英国、德国)的茶叶、咖啡进口量(单位:吨),写作要求是总结主要特征、做相关对比。
开头段
改写题目,说明图表的核心内容——对比四个国家两种饮品的进口量。
概述段
总结两个最突出的整体特征:①英国茶叶进口量最高,德国咖啡进口量最高;②加拿大和美国进口模式相似,咖啡进口量均为茶叶的两倍;英国是唯一茶叶进口量高于咖啡的国家。
细节段1
聚焦茶叶进口数据,重点突出英国80000吨的最高值,对比其他三国的茶叶进口量,同时点明英国咖啡进口量是四个国家里最低的(30000吨)。
细节段2
聚焦咖啡进口数据,说明德国50000吨为咖啡进口最高值,加拿大和美国咖啡进口量相近(均为40000吨左右),且这两国的咖啡进口量都远高于本国茶叶进口量,完成国家间、品类间的对比。
语言逻辑
使用对比类衔接词(by contrast, however, followed by),保证数据描述准确,没有添加个人主观推断,所有内容均来自图表信息,符合雅思小作文的写作评分要求。