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网站访问比较

Website Visits Comparison
数据图小作文
🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 079📝 词数 175

📝 题目

The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

网站访问比较

✍️ 参考范文

The bar chart compares the number of monthly visits to a community website across its first two years of use, over the 12-month period from September to August.

Overall, the website was vastly more popular in its second year, with visits more than doubling for most months, peaking in the summer period of June and July. The only exception to this upward trend was August, when first-year visits overtook second-year numbers.

In the first year, visits started at just 2000 in September, rising gradually to 10,000 in November and December before dropping sharply to only 1000 visits in February and March. Numbers then recovered steadily to end the period at a high of 14,500 visits in August.

By contrast, second-year visits started higher, at 3500 in September, climbed to 17,000 by November, and remained over 10,000 per month even in the early-year trough. Visits then rose dramatically to peak at roughly 22,500 in both June and July, before falling to 12,500 in August, the only month where visitor numbers were lower than the first year.

第一步
明确图表核心信息 本题为雅思小作文动态柱状图,核心任务是总结对比该社区网站第一年和第二年(9月至次年8月)的月度访问量,需要完成三个核心要求:梳理整体趋势、提取关键极值、做必要的跨年度对比。
开头段
改写题目,清晰说明图表展示内容,点明对比维度(两个使用年度、时间范围为9月到次年8月)。
概述段
总结最明显的整体特征:第二年网站访问量整体远高于第一年,访问峰值出现在第二年6-7月;唯一的特例是8月第一年访问量反超第二年,这一核心反常特征必须在概述中体现。
细节段1
先描述第一年的访问量变化:首年9月起步访问量仅2000,11-12月上升至10000,随后2-3月跌至全年谷底1000,之后稳步回升,在8月达到首年最高值14500,完整梳理首年的趋势、峰值和谷值。
细节段2
对比描述第二年的访问量变化:第二年起步访问量更高(9月3500),11月就达到17000,即使在年初的低谷期也维持在10000以上,随后大幅增长在6、7月达到全年峰值22500,最后8月回落至12500,明确点出这是唯一一个访问量低于首年的月份,完成对比。
数据准确性校验
核对每个月的数值匹配,避免数据错误,覆盖所有核心特征:整体趋势、峰值、谷值、特殊反差点、关键数值对比,满足雅思小作文的评分要求。