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缺勤调查结果

Absence Survey Results
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📝 题目

The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005, and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

缺勤调查结果

✍️ 参考范文

The bar chart compares five reasons cited for workplace absenteeism across three survey years (2000, 2005, 2010) in one European country, measured by the percentage of respondents. Overall, illness was consistently the most common reason for missing work across the period, even as its share declined, while stress remained the least common cause. All other reasons saw fluctuating proportions, with family responsibilities the second-most cited reason overall. Illness accounted for 45% of responses in 2000, the highest figure for any reason. This fell slightly to 40% in 2005 and to 35% in 2010, though it still led all causes. By contrast, stress was the least cited reason, rising marginally from 6% in 2000 to 12% in 2010 after dipping to 5% in 2005. Looking at other factors, family responsibilities were the second most common reason, starting at 27% in 2000 before dropping to 20% in 2005 then rising slightly to 21% in 2010. The share of people citing personal needs rose from 13% to 20% between 2000 and 2005, then fell to 17% in 2010, while unexpected problems jumped from 8% in 2000 to 14% in 2005 before remaining stable at that level in 2010.

审题与结构规划
本题为雅思写作Part 1静态动态结合柱状图,核心是总结旷工原因的三年调查数据。写作结构分为四段:首段改写题目说明图表内容,第二段提炼总体特征(最高/最低值、整体趋势),第三、四段分组对比具体数据,避免逐一罗列所有数值。
核心特征提炼
首先确定最显著特征:illness(生病)始终是排名第一的旷工原因,但占比逐年下降;stress(压力)始终是占比最低的原因,整体小幅上升。其次,剩余三类原因呈现波动趋势,其中家庭责任是第二大常见原因,将这些作为overview段的核心内容,符合Part 1对概括总体趋势的要求。
第一组对比最高和最低值
先描述illness的数值变化(45%→40%→35%),再描述stress的数值变化(6%→5%→12%),形成高低对比。
第二组描述剩余三类原因的变化
家庭责任(27%→20%→21%)、个人需求(13%→20%→17%)、突发问题(8%→14%→14%),清晰呈现各自的波动特征,同时进行跨类别的数值比较。
语言控制
使用准确的趋势描述词汇(decline, rise, dip, fluctuate, remain stable),避免重复,保证数据准确、逻辑连贯,没有添加主观推断,只客观报告图表信息。