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空气污染趋势

Air Pollution Trends
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📝 题目

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

空气污染趋势

✍️ 参考范文

The line graph illustrates the volumes of air pollutants from three different sources, as well as total emissions, in the UK over the 15-year period from 1990 to 2005, measured in million tonnes.

Overall, total air pollutants in the UK saw a significant decline throughout the period, and industry was consistently the largest source of air pollution, while transport was the only source that saw an increase in emissions.

In detail, total air pollutants dropped from around 7 million tonnes in 1990 to just over 3 million tonnes in 2005. The most dramatic reduction was seen in industrial emissions, which fell from 5.5 million tonnes to exactly 2 million tonnes, despite remaining the biggest polluter across the whole period. By contrast, emissions from transport rose marginally from roughly 0.8 million tonnes in 1990 to a peak of 1 million tonnes in 2002, before stabilising at that level until 2005.

Households were the smallest source of pollution, with emissions decreasing gradually from 0.9 million tonnes to a negligible 0.1 million tonnes by the end of the timeframe.

审题与结构搭建
本题是雅思写作Part1动态折线图,核心要求是总结1990-2005年英国不同来源空气污染物的变化特征、做相关对比。结构采用标准四段式:开头段改写题目、概述段总结整体趋势、主体两段分别描述核心数据细节并做对比。
开头段改写
替换题目核心词汇,show替换为illustratedifferent sources补充说明是三类来源加总量,明确时间范围、计量单位,完成题目改写,不添加额外信息。
概述段提炼整体特征
首先抓最核心的总趋势:总污染物大幅下降;再抓极值对比:工业始终是最大污染源,交通是唯一排放量上升的污染源,家庭是排放量最低的来源且持续下降,覆盖所有主要整体特征,不出现具体数值。
首先描述总量和最大污染源工业的变化
给出起点(1990年总量约7百万吨、工业5.5百万吨)和终点(2005年总量3百万吨、工业2百万吨),点明工业的下降幅度最大,同时强调其始终是第一大污染源的地位。
再对比描述另外两个来源
交通是唯一上升的类别,给出其起点约0.8百万吨、2002年峰值1百万吨后平稳的特征;家庭是最小污染源,从0.9百万吨逐步下降到2005年接近0的极低水平,完成所有类别的数据对比和特征覆盖。
语言与逻辑检查
使用恰当的趋势描述词汇(decline, fall, rise, stabilise, drop等)、对比连接词(by contrast, despite等),确保逻辑连贯,没有遗漏核心信息,也没有添加主观推断内容。