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科研支出趋势

Research Spending Trends
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🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 063📝 词数 202

📝 题目

The graph below shows U.S. government spending on research between 1980 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

科研支出趋势

✍️ 参考范文

The line graph illustrates how much the US government allocated to research across five different sectors from 1980 to 2008, measured in billions of dollars. Overall, health research received by far the largest amount of government funding over the period, and it was also the category that saw the most significant growth in expenditure. By contrast, spending on the other four research areas remained relatively stable, with all of these receiving less than $10 billion annually by the end of the timeframe. In detail, federal spending on health research started at around $8 billion in 1980. After a slight dip to approximately $7 billion in 1984, it rose dramatically, reaching a peak of nearly $22 billion in 2004, before falling back to around $18 billion in 2008. Looking at the other sectors, space research was the second-best funded area in 2008, at about $9 billion, having seen a gradual rise from $6 billion in 1980. Spending on energy and other research areas both ended the period at similar levels to 1980 (around $5-8 billion, and $5 billion respectively), despite some fluctuations over the years. General science had consistently the lowest funding throughout the 28-year period, remaining between $2 billion and $5 billion.

开头段清晰改写图形主题,说明测量对象、时间范围与单位,满足开头要求。
概述段准确识别两大核心特征
1)卫生是全程主导且增长最快的类别;2)其他部门的支出远低且相对平稳。这覆盖了最突出的整体趋势。
细节段先为最高支出类别(卫生)提供准确数据,用具体近似数值描述其初期下滑、急剧上升、峰值与最终回落;随后对比其余四个类别,说明它们的终值、整体趋势(逐渐上升、波动但终值平稳、持续最低)及相互之间的相关比较,覆盖所有关键数据而无冗余细节。
全文采用逻辑结构
引言→概述→最高支出类别细节→其他类别细节,符合Part 1的标准结构。
恰当地使用 Overall, In detail, By contrast, Looking at, after, before, despite, respectively 等连接词串联观点,标示对比、时序与类别间的反差。
使用一系列描述趋势与数据的恰当词汇,包括 allocated, expenditure, dip, rose dramatically, peak, fell back, gradual rise, fluctuations, consistently,在合适位置避免重复 increase、spend 等基础词,无影响理解的拼写错误。
混合使用简单句与复合句结构,包括分词结构、比较结构及描述趋势的从句。大多数句子语法准确,时态使用正确(覆盖的历史数据段用过去时),符合对已完成过去时段数据的描述要求。