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用水量变化

Water Usage Changes
数据图小作文
🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 007📝 词数 193

📝 题目

The charts below show the percentage of water used by different sectors in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

用水量变化

✍️ 参考范文

The two pie charts compare the proportion of water consumed across five different sectors (food industry, service industry, household use, manufacturing and building industry) in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007.

Overall, the food industry accounted for the largest share of water use in both years, despite a slight decline in its figure. By contrast, the service industry and household use saw growth in their water consumption proportions, while the building industry remained the smallest water user over the period.

In detail, nearly half of total water was used by the food industry in 1997, at 48%, though this dropped to 41% a decade later. The service industry experienced the most noticeable rise: its percentage more than doubled from 13% in 1997 to 25% in 2007, making it the second biggest water consumer in the latter year. A similar upward trend could be seen in household use, which grew marginally from 19% to 21%.

On the other hand, water use in the manufacturing sector fell from 15% to 11%, and the building industry’s water consumption declined even further, from 5% to merely 2%, remaining the least water-reliant sector in Sydney in both years.

开头段
改写题目,说明图表核心内容(对比1997和2007年悉尼不同部门用水百分比)
这是雅思小作文的动态饼图题,对比两个年份悉尼5个行业的用水占比。写作结构遵循标准小作文逻辑。
概述段
总结整体趋势:占比最高的始终是食品业;占比上升的是服务业和家庭用水;占比下降的是其余部门,建筑业始终占比最低。
细节段1
描述占比最高、上升最明显的类别(食品业、服务业、家庭用水)的数值变化和对比
细节段2
描述占比下降的类别(制造业、建筑业)的数值变化,突出其最低占比的特征
数据梳理
整理图表各部门两个年份的占比:
部门 1997年占比 2007年占比 变化趋势
食品工业 48% 41% 下降7%,始终最高
服务业 13% 25% 上升12%,涨幅最大
家庭用水 19% 21% 小幅上升2%
制造业 15% 11% 下降4%
建筑业 5% 2% 下降3%,始终最低
避免重复罗列数据,而是突出对比和趋势
使用by contrast, on the other hand, similar upward trend, most noticeable rise, merely等词体现对比和程度
确保数据准确对应,不出现数值错误,所有对比都基于图表给出的占比