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煤炭发电

Coal Electricity Production
流程图小作文
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📝 题目

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

煤炭发电

✍️ 参考范文

The flow diagram illustrates the linear process of generating electricity from coal, along with the distribution of the final power and waste outputs. Overall, coal-fired electricity production is a multi-stage process that progresses from raw coal extraction to final power delivery, generating two types of waste byproducts at different stages. The entire process can be broadly divided into three main phases: coal preparation, gas processing, power generation and distribution. To begin with, raw coal is extracted from an underground mine, then sent to a crusher where large coal chunks are ground into fine powder. Next, the crushed coal is transported via a rail cart to a gasifier. At the gasification stage, solid waste is removed as a byproduct, while the produced syngas is piped to a cooler for purification and cooling. The cooled treated gas is then fed into a gas power plant, where it is burned to drive power generation. At this final production stage, heat waste is discharged, and the generated electricity is transmitted and supplied to two end users: residential houses and industrial facilities.

审题定位
本题为雅思写作Part 1的流程图题,核心是描述煤炭发电的完整流程,写作要求为20分钟内完成150-200字的文章,需提炼核心特征、按逻辑顺序描述流程、说明关联信息。
开头段
改写题目,点明图表内容为煤炭发电的流程及电力输送、废物产出情况。
概述段
总结流程整体属性——线性多步骤流程,分为煤炭预处理、煤气处理、发电输送三个核心阶段,同时点明全程会产生两类废弃物的核心特征。
细节段1
按流程的先后顺序,描述从采煤、碎煤到运输至气化炉的上游准备环节,明确各步骤的顺序关系。
细节段2
继续按顺序描述气化(排出固体废弃物)、气体冷却、电厂发电(排出热废弃物)、最终电力输送至民居和工业用户的下游环节,完整覆盖所有流程节点,清晰说明废弃物的产生位置和电力的最终去向。
语言逻辑
使用表顺序的连接词(To begin with, Next, then等)串联步骤,符合流程图“按生产顺序描述”的写作逻辑,避免信息遗漏;同时明确区分主产物(电力)和副产物(固体垃圾、废热),突出流程的核心产出,满足评分标准中“概括主要特征、逻辑连贯”的要求。