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温室气体排放

Greenhouse Gas Emissions
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🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 055📝 词数 194

📝 题目

The graph below shows the three kinds of greenhouse gas emission sources (oil/coal/gas) in the UK.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

温室气体排放

✍️ 参考范文

The bar chart illustrates the quantity of carbon emissions released by three different fossil fuels (namely gas, oil and coal) in the UK between 1990 and 2010, measured in million tonnes. Overall, while gas was the only source of carbon emissions whose emission levels increased over the 20-year period, both coal and oil saw declines in their emission amounts. In addition, coal was the most polluting fossil fuel at the start of the period, but gas became the largest emission source by 2010. In detail, coal released 310 million tons of carbon in 1990, the highest figure in that year, followed by oil at 270 million tons and gas at around 220 million tons. Over the following two decades, however, coal emissions fell steadily to just 190 million tons, making it the least significant source of the three. Similarly, emissions from oil dropped gradually to 210 million tons in 2010, despite a slight fall to 240 million tons in 1995. By contrast, the amount of carbon emitted by gas rose consistently over the period, reaching a peak of approximately 320 million tons in 2010, which exceeded the emission levels of the other two fuels.

审题分析
本题为雅思写作Part 1动态柱状图题,写作任务是总结英国1990-2010年三种化石燃料(天然气、石油、煤炭)的温室气体(碳排放)特征,需要描述主要趋势、核心数据并做相关对比。
开头段
改写题目,清晰说明图表内容、统计对象、测量单位、时间范围,完成题目引入。
总览段
概括整体核心趋势:天然气排放量持续上升,石油和煤炭排放量下降;同时点明主导排放源的变化:1990年煤炭排放最高,2010年天然气成为最大排放源,符合Part 1"先总述后细节"的评分要求。
细节段1
描述呈下降趋势的煤炭和石油的相关数据:首先给出1990年的初始排放数值,再按时间顺序描述二者到2010年的下降变化,补充石油1995年小幅波动的细节,准确还原数据特征。
细节段2
描述呈上升趋势的天然气的相关数据:说明其排放持续增长的趋势,点明2010年的峰值,同时对比其最终排放量超过另外两种燃料,完成数据对比。
语言控制
全文用词准确,句式多变,同时覆盖所有核心数据和趋势,满足雅思写作Part 1的评分标准。