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消费支出模式

Consumer Spending Patterns
数据图小作文
🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 067📝 词数 164

📝 题目

The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending on different commodities and services in a particular European country in 1998 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

消费支出模式

✍️ 参考范文

The two bar charts compare how much people in a specific European country spent on six different categories of goods and services, as a percentage of total expenditure, in 1998 and 2008. Overall, electronic goods and clothing were the largest expenses in both years, and spending on these items rose over the period. By contrast, the proportions of spending on holidays, printed media and cinema attendance fell, while the share allocated to eating out remained unchanged. In detail, electronic goods accounted for the highest proportion of spending at 16% in 1998, and this figure increased to 20% a decade later. Spending on clothing also saw a significant rise, from 12% to 18%, making it the second largest expenditure category by 2008. Meanwhile, the proportion of spending on holidays declined from 8% to 5%, and spending on both newspapers/magazines and cinema visits dropped by two thirds, from 3% to just 1% each. Finally, eating out consistently represented 6% of total spending in both surveyed years.

开头段改写题目
按照小作文要求,首先改写题干信息,明确图表内容为对比某欧洲国家1998和2008年六个品类消费占总支出的比例,完成引入。
总体特征段(overview)
第一步先总结最核心的整体趋势:首先找出两年占比最高的品类——电子产品和服装,且这两项占比均上升;其次总结下降的品类(度假、报刊杂志、观影),以及唯一占比不变的品类(外出就餐),清晰覆盖整体最突出的特征,符合评分要求的overview得分点。
第一组描述上升的品类
按占比从高到低,先写始终占比最高的电子产品,给出两年的具体数据16%到20%;再描述服装,数据从12%上升到18%,成为第二大支出项,完成上升项的对比。
第二组描述下降和不变的品类
先写度假的占比从8%降到5%;再说明两个最低占比的品类(报刊、观影)的变化,均从3%降到1%;最后提及占比稳定不变的外出就餐,两年均为6%,覆盖所有数据,且进行了合理的同趋势分组对比,没有罗列数据,逻辑清晰。
内容检查
没有冗余信息,准确覆盖了所有主要特征和相关对比,满足雅思小作文的评分标准。