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水资源消费模式

Water Consumption Patterns
数据图小作文
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📝 题目

The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

水资源消费模式

✍️ 参考范文

The two charts illustrate the proportion of water consumed by different sectors in Australia in 2004, as well as how residential water was used for various domestic purposes in the same year. Overall, the residential sector was by far the largest water consumer in 2004, accounting for over two-thirds of total water use. Within households, water was primarily used for gardening and bathroom purposes, while kitchen use represented the smallest share. According to the pie chart, 70% of Australia’s total water was supplied to residential properties, which consisted of 50% for houses and 20% for apartments. By contrast, industry, business and government sectors used much smaller proportions, at 11%, 10% and 6% respectively, and the remaining 3% went to other uses. Turning to the bar chart, gardening was the most water-intensive domestic activity, making up 28% of residential water use. This was followed closely by bathroom use at 27%, and washing clothes accounted for 20%. Toilet flushing used 15% of residential water, while kitchen-related water use was the lowest, at only 10%.

开头段改写题目
明确两个图表的核心内容,即2004年澳大利亚不同领域的用水占比,以及居民用水的细分用途,符合小作文开头的基本要求。
概述段总结核心特征
一是居民领域是最大的用水主体,占总用水的绝大多数;二是居民用水中,花园浇灌和浴室用水占比最高,厨房用水占比最低,清晰覆盖两个图表的最突出趋势。
主体第一段描述饼图(整体用水分配)
首先点明居民用水占70%的最高占比,拆分说明其中独立住宅和公寓的占比;接着依次对比工业、商业、政府和其他类别的用水占比,体现数据间的差异,符合饼图按占比从高到低描述、突出对比的写作逻辑。
主体第二段描述柱状图(居民用水细分)
按占比从高到低的顺序描述不同用途的占比数据:花园用水最高(28%),其次是浴室(27%)、洗衣(20%)、冲厕(15%),厨房用水占比最低(10%),数据描述准确,逻辑清晰。
没有添加主观观点,完整覆盖所有核心数据,对比清晰,符合雅思小作文的评分标准。