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水价比较

Water Cost Comparison
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📝 题目

The table below shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

水价比较

✍️ 参考范文

The table compares water charges in five Australian cities, illustrating usage-based kilolitre rates (for consumption under and over 125 kilolitres) and average annual household water bills.

Overall, Perth had the highest average household water bill and the steepest charge for high water usage, while Melbourne recorded the lowest costs across all metrics. Water pricing structures varied, with flat rates in Melbourne and Sydney, and tiered pricing in the other three cities.

Looking at usage charges in detail, Adelaide and Perth shared the lowest rate for consumption up to 125KL, at $0.42 per kilolitre, but this rate more than doubled in Adelaide (to $1.00) and nearly quadrupled in Perth (to $1.50) for usage over the 125KL threshold. Brisbane had a small price rise for excess usage, from $0.81 to $0.84 per KL. In contrast, Melbourne and Sydney applied uniform flat rates: Melbourne charged $0.78 per KL regardless of usage, while Sydney had the highest flat rate at $0.98 per KL.

In terms of average household bills, Perth households paid the most at $332, followed by Sydney ($319), Adelaide ($312) and Brisbane ($310), with all four cities having similar bills between $310 and $335. Melbourne’s average bill was by far the lowest, at just $253 per household.

审题与结构搭建
这是雅思写作Part 1静态表格题,核心要求是总结澳大利亚5个城市的水费信息,挑选核心特征并做相关对比。写作遵循标准Part 1结构:开头改写题目、概述段总结整体最突出特征、主体段分维度(单价、平均账单)做细节对比。
开头段
改写原题,说明表格展示内容,将题干的cost of water替换为water charges,清晰点明表格包含两类单价(125KL以内/超过125KL)和家庭平均账单三个维度的信息。
概述段(Overall)
提炼2个最核心的整体特征:①成本极值:珀斯的平均账单和超额用水单价最高,墨尔本所有水费指标最低;②定价模式差异:墨尔本和悉尼是统一单价,其余三个城市是阶梯定价(超额后水费上涨),覆盖了表格最突出的整体规律,符合评分要求中"overview清晰"的标准。
先讲阶梯定价的城市
阿德莱德和珀斯的基础档(125KL以内)单价最低($0.42/KL),但超额后涨幅极大,珀斯超额单价是所有城市最高值;布里斯班超额后只有微幅上涨。
分类对比不同城市的用水单价。
再讲固定单价的城市
墨尔本是最低的固定单价,悉尼是最高的固定单价,对比清晰,覆盖了所有城市的单价数据,且重点突出极值和差异。
点明珀斯的平均账单最高,随后悉尼、阿德莱德、布里斯班的账单非常接近,都在310-332美元区间。
对比家庭平均水费。
最后点明墨尔本的平均账单远低于其他城市,是最低值,呼应概述段的结论,完成数据的对比和总结。
语言逻辑
全程使用对比逻辑连接词(overall, in detail, in contrast, in terms of, followed by, by far),数据引用准确,没有添加主观信息,完全基于表格内容,符合雅思Part 1的评分要求。