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手机合约费用

Mobile Contract Costs
数据图小作文
🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 028📝 词数 190

📝 题目

The graph below shows the average cost of monthly contracts for four different mobile (cell) phones in one European country from January to September 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

手机合约费用

✍️ 参考范文

The line graph illustrates the average monthly cost of four mobile phone contracts in a European nation over the 9-month period from January to September 2012.

Overall, Domo was consistently the most expensive contract for most of the period, while Alpha saw the most dramatic growth and became the priciest option by the end of the timeframe. Sim TX, by contrast, was the only contract that became cheaper over the months.

In January, Domo contracts cost £15 monthly, and this figure rose gradually to a peak of £25 in July before dipping slightly to £23 by September. Lex contracts also increased, from around £12 initially to £18 in September, though they had a small dip to £10 in February.

Alpha contracts were the cheapest for the first half of 2012, starting at £5 and remaining below £7 until June. They then soared sharply to reach £25 in September, matching Domo’s July peak and surpassing the other two providers. Sim TX, after a small rise to £14 in June, fell steadily to end at just over £8 in September, making it the most affordable option by the end of the period.

开头段
改写题干,清楚说明图表内容,不直接照抄原题表述。
本文遵循雅思写作Part 1的标准结构。
概述段
先抓“大图景”,识别四款手机合约最核心、最明显的趋势——Domo大部分时间价格最高、Alpha急剧上涨、Sim TX持续降价。
细节段
数据按逻辑分组,先讲Domo和Lex的上涨及其关键数值与波动,再讲Alpha(后期猛涨)与Sim TX(年中见顶后下跌)的鲜明反差,使对比清晰。
数据准确性(Data accuracy)
所有关键数值点都准确呈现:起始值、峰值、终值及主要波动(如Alpha在7月前的低点、Sim TX在6月的峰值、Domo在7月的峰值、Lex在2月的低点)。
对比要求(Comparison requirements)
全文贯穿相关对比:对期初和期末的价格进行排序,将Domo/Lex/Alpha的上涨与Sim TX的下跌形成对照,并指出最后几月Alpha对其他合约的反超。
连贯性(Cohesion)
恰当使用连接词(overall, by contrast, initially, then, after),使描述逻辑流畅,趋势与数据点之间衔接清晰。