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房价比较

House Price Comparison
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🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 054📝 词数 173

📝 题目

The bar chart shows the prices of houses in England and its capital, London, and the average house prices in other regions of England.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

房价比较

✍️ 参考范文

The two bar charts compare average house prices in England overall and its capital London between 1995 and 2013, as well as 2013 house prices across different English regions.

Overall, average house prices rose significantly in both England and London over the period, with London consistently having far higher property prices than the national average. In 2013, London was also the most expensive region for housing, while the North East was the cheapest area in England.

In 1995, the average house price in England was around £130,000, whereas London’s average stood at £200,000. By 2013, these figures had increased to £200,000 for England and over £400,000 for London, meaning London’s house prices more than doubled, while the national average rose by around 50%.

Looking at regional prices in 2013, London was the highest at £400,000, followed by the South East at roughly £320,000 and the South West at £270,000. The North West had an average price of £200,000, while the Midlands and North East were notably cheaper, at around £120,000 and £100,000 respectively.

审题
首先确定图表类型为柱状图,核心主题是英国及伦敦房价的时间变化,以及英国其他区域的房价对比;任务要求是总结主要特征、做相关对比。
开头段
改写题目,清晰说明两张图表的核心内容,点明对比的维度(时间变化+区域差异)。
概述段
提炼最核心的整体趋势:全英和伦敦房价均上涨、伦敦房价始终远高于全国平均;2013年伦敦是房价最高区域,东北部最低。
细节段1
描述1995-2013年英格兰整体和伦敦的房价变化,给出具体数值对比,点明涨幅差异(伦敦涨幅远超全国平均)。
细节段2
描述2013年各个区域的房价差异,按价格从高到低排序,给出关键数值,突出区域间的价格差距。
要点筛选
不遗漏核心数据(1995和2013年的全国、伦敦房价,2013年各区域房价),重点突出最高值、最低值、变化趋势、显著差距,避免罗列所有零散数据,符合雅思小动图/静图结合的写作逻辑。
语言逻辑
使用对比连接词(whereas, while, followed by, respectively等),时态正确(描述过去数据用一般过去时,整体趋势用过去式),符合学术写作的客观表述要求。