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平均收入比较

Average Earnings Comparison
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📝 题目

The chart below shows the average earnings of people in various areas of work in one country in 2000 and 2010. The table shows the average salary for all sectors in the same year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

平均收入比较

✍️ 参考范文

The bar chart compares average annual full-time earnings across six different work sectors in a particular country in 2000 and 2010, and the table shows the overall average salary across all sectors for the same two years. Overall, average salaries rose across all six sectors over the decade, pushing the national average up from $44,000 to $50,000. Financial Services was consistently the highest-paying sector by a significant margin, while Tourism remained the lowest-paid throughout the period. In detail, workers in Financial Services earned around $115,000 in 2000, with this figure rising to nearly $130,000 by 2010, well above the national average in both years. Telecommunications was the second highest-paid sector, with salaries increasing from roughly $60,000 to about $70,000. By contrast, Tourism salaries were the lowest, growing from just $20,000 in 2000 to $22,000 ten years later, far below the overall average. Salaries in Administration, Transport and Retail/Shops were broadly comparable, all increasing over the period. Administration pay rose from around $45,000 to $52,000, Transport salaries went from roughly $45,000 to $55,000, and Retail earnings increased from $35,000 to $50,000, almost reaching the national average by 2010.

开头段
改写题目,清晰说明柱状图和表格分别展示的信息,点明对比的两个年份(2000、2010)与涉及对象(六个行业的薪资、全行业平均薪资)。
总览段(概述主要特征)
① 核心趋势:所有行业的薪资在这10年间均上涨,带动全行业平均薪资从4.4万美元上涨至5万美元; ② 极值对比:金融服务业始终是薪资最高的行业,旅游业始终是薪资最低的行业。
细节段
① 先描述最高薪资的金融服务业,给出两年的具体数值,并说明其远高于全国平均水平;接着描述第二高薪的电信业的薪资变化数值。 ② 再描述最低薪资的旅游业,给出两年数值,说明其远低于全国平均水平。 ③ 最后描述剩下三个薪资水平相近的行业(行政、交通、零售)的薪资增长情况,补充零售行业在2010年接近全国平均薪资的细节。
数据选取逻辑
优先选取核心特征:整体变化趋势(全部上涨)、极值(最高/最低薪资行业)、与全行业平均值的对比,再按薪资从高到低的顺序描述各行业的具体数值,避免信息杂乱,符合小作文“总结主要特征、做相关对比”的要求。