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📝 题目

The charts below shows the proportion of income spent on food and other goods across 3 European nations from 1998 to 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✍️ 参考范文

The two bar charts compare the shares of income allocated to food and other goods in three European countries (France, Germany and England) in 1998 and 2008.

Overall, spending on both categories rose in all three nations over the decade. France saw the most dramatic increases, while Germany consistently spent the highest proportion of income on food, and England spent the least on food across the period.

In detail, in 1998, Germans spent 25% of their income on food, far higher than 15% in France and just 10% in England. By 2008, food expenditure in France had jumped to 40%, overtaking Germany’s 30%, whereas England’s figure rose slightly to 15%, remaining the lowest.

For other goods, all three countries spent under 20% of income in 1998, with France at 9%, England at 8% and Germany the highest at 17%. Spending in all three nations grew by 2008: France recorded the largest surge to 40%, followed by England which saw a more than four-fold increase to 35%, while Germany’s rose more modestly to 24%.

写作结构规划

本题为动态柱状图雅思小作文，采用标准四段结构：开头段改写题目、概述段总结整体趋势、两个主体段分别对食物、其他商品的支出做细节描述和对比。

开头段处理

同义改写题目，将原句的shows the proportion of income spent on替换为compare the shares of income allocated to，明确统计对象（三个国家、两个支出类别、两个年份），避免重复原题表述。

概述段（overview）提炼核心特征

首先总结最明显的整体趋势：两个类别的支出占比在三个国家全部上升；其次提炼极值特征：法国的两类支出涨幅最显著，德国始终在食物支出上处于较高水平，英国食物支出占比始终最低，完成主要特征的概括，符合评分要求。

第一个主体段描述食物支出

先说明1998年的初始值对比（德国25%最高，法国15%次之，英国10%最低），再描述2008年的变化：法国翻倍以上增长到40%反超德国，德国增长到30%，英国小幅增长到15%，仍为最低，清晰体现变化和国家间对比。

第二个主体段描述其他商品支出

先说明1998年三个国家占比都低于20%的初始特征，再分别描述2008年的变化：法国涨幅最大到40%，英国翻四倍多到35%，德国小幅增长到24%，对比不同国家的增长幅度差异。