← 返回目录

学生分布

Student Distribution
数据图小作文
🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 008📝 词数 178

📝 题目

The table below shows the percentage of students in six different departments of a university in 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

学生分布

✍️ 参考范文

The table illustrates the proportions of female students, students whose first language is not English, and students born outside Australia across six university departments in 2011. Overall, Humanities and Education had the highest share of female students, while IT and Engineering were male-dominated. Additionally, STEM departments (Science, Physics, IT, Engineering) had significantly higher percentages of non-native English speakers and international students (born overseas) compared to humanities and education. In detail, females made up 72% of Humanities students and 68% of Education students, the two highest figures, whereas Engineering and IT had the smallest female proportions at only 15% and 17% respectively. By contrast, these two technical fields had the highest shares of students with English as a second language: 49% in IT and 42% in Engineering, far above the 12% and 16% recorded in Humanities and Education. Turning to international students, Physics and IT shared the top figure of 56% of students born outside Australia, followed by Engineering (48%) and Science (31%). Humanities had the lowest proportion of overseas-born students at just 20%, marginally lower than Education’s 23%.

本文符合雅思学术类写作Part 1的要求:客观总结数据、未加入个人观点,并覆盖六个院系全部三个测量类别。
开头段
改写题干,说明表格所展示的内容,避免直接照抄原题表述。
概述段
概括最清晰的两大整体趋势——文教类与STEM类院系之间的性别差异,以及这两类院系在非英语母语学生和国际学生占比上的对比,这是雅思Part 1拿高分必备的要点。
第一个细节段
对比女学生占比,用准确数据指出最高值(人文、教育)和最低值(IT、工程),并与同批院系的非英语母语学生数据进行直接对比。
第二个细节段
描述“出生于澳大利亚以外”这一类别,同样指出峰值(物理和IT并列),对其余院系排序,并说明该指标的最低值(人文)及支撑数据。
使用逻辑连接词(overall, in detail, by contrast, turning to, followed by, marginally lower than)串联观点。
使用多样词汇描述占比(proportion, share, figure, made up, recorded)和对比数据(highest, smallest, far above, top, lowest),避免语言重复。
表格中所有数据均准确呈现,并按题目要求对各院系进行了相关对比。