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婚姻趋势

Marriage Trends
数据图小作文
🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 002📝 词数 170

📝 题目

The graph below shows the number of marriages in the UK from 1951 to 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

婚姻趋势

✍️ 参考范文

The line graph illustrates how many marriages (total marriages, first marriages and remarriages) took place in England and Wales over the 50-year period from 1951 to 2001. Overall, the total number of marriages and the figure for first marriages both saw a decline after an initial rise, while remarriages increased steadily throughout the period. In addition, first marriages consistently accounted for the majority of marriages except for the slight upward trend of remarriages in the final years. In 1951, there were 400,000 total marriages in the UK, and this figure remained stable until 1961 before peaking at roughly 460,000 in 1971. After that, total marriages fell gradually to around 390,000 in 2001. Similarly, first marriages started at 350,000 in 1951, rose slightly to a peak of 360,000 a decade later, then dropped significantly to just over 260,000 by 2001. By contrast, remarriages were the least common type, starting at 150,000 in 1951. The number stayed relatively stable at about 150,000 until 1991, after which it rose to 210,000 in 2001.

审题与结构搭建
本题为雅思写作Part1动态折线图题,要求描述1951-2001年英格兰和威尔士三类婚姻数量的变化,写作需包含开头改写题目、总体趋势概述、细节数据对比三个核心部分。
开头段处理
改写原题题干,将题目中的“the number of marriages in the UK from 1951 to 2001”改写为“how many marriages (total marriages, first marriages and remarriages) took place in England and Wales over the 50-year period from 1951 to 2001”,明确图表的三个统计类别,避免照抄原题。
总体趋势段(Overview)
提炼最核心的宏观特征:① 总婚姻数和初婚数都是先升后降;② 再婚数全程稳定上升;③ 初婚始终是婚姻的主要类型,直到末期再婚占比有所提升。该段不加入具体数据,只总结最高/最低、整体升降、核心对比关系。
第一组描述趋势相似的总婚姻和初婚
选取起点(1951年)、稳定期(1951-1961)、峰值(1971年)、终点(2001年)的关键数据,对比两者相似的先升后降趋势,同时明确初婚的数值始终低于总婚姻数。
第二组描述趋势相反的再婚
指出再婚始终是三类里数量最低的,描述其1951-1991年的平稳阶段,和1991-2001年的明显上升趋势,补充终点2001年的数值,和前两类的下降形成对比。
逻辑与语言检查
使用连接词Overall, Similarly, By contrast等体现段落和数据间的逻辑关系,准确使用peak at, decline, remain stable, rise slightly等动态趋势词汇,确保数据对比清晰,没有遗漏核心特征。