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垃圾收集趋势

Waste Collection Trends
数据图小作文
🏷️ 数据图📋 ID: 047📝 词数 185

📝 题目

The chart below shows the amount of waste collected by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

垃圾收集趋势

✍️ 参考范文

The bar chart illustrates how much waste of four categories (paper, glass, tins, garden waste) was collected by a recycling centre over the period 2011 to 2015, measured in tons. Overall, paper was the most collected type of waste across the period, while all categories saw an increase in collected amounts by 2015, except for a temporary dip in garden waste in 2012. In detail, paper waste collection stood at 57 tons in 2011, before fluctuating and reaching a peak of 70 tons in 2015, making it the largest waste stream throughout the five years. Glass collection rose gradually from 48 tons in 2011 to 52 tons in 2015, becoming the second most collected waste type by the end of the period. Tins saw a steady growth, rising from 35 tons in 2011 to 39 tons in 2015, despite a slight fall to 27 tons in 2012. Garden waste was the only category that experienced an initial drop, declining to 15 tons in 2012 from 32 tons in 2011, then recovering to 35 tons in 2015, which remained the lowest among the four waste types.

结构规划
雅思小作文采用“总-分”结构,首先改写题目介绍图表核心内容,接着提炼整体趋势(总览段),最后分细节描述数据并进行对比,符合评分标准的任务完成度要求。
开头段改写
将题目中的shows替换为illustratesthe amount of waste补充四类垃圾类型,明确时间和单位,清晰引入图表信息。
总览段提炼核心特征
首先指出纸张是收集量最高的垃圾类别,然后点明整体趋势:除园林垃圾2012年短暂下降外,所有类别垃圾到2015年收集量均上升,覆盖了最核心的整体规律,满足“概述主要特征”的要求。
首先描述占比最高的纸张
给出起始数据、波动过程和最终峰值,明确其最高占比的地位;接着描述玻璃,说明其稳步增长的趋势和最终第二的排名,将高值类别放在一起描述。
再描述低值的金属罐和园林垃圾
金属罐除了2012年小幅下降外整体稳步增长;园林垃圾是唯一初期下降的类别,给出其低谷值和后期恢复的数据,同时点明其最终仍是收集量最低的类别,过程中全程对比不同类别的数值大小和变化趋势,满足“相关处做对比”的要求。
语言检查
逻辑连贯,词汇和句式有多样性变化。