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出口比例趋势

Export Percentage Trends
数据图小作文
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📝 题目

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

出口比例趋势

✍️ 参考范文

The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian exports sent to four nations (Japan, the US, China, and India) between 1990 and 2012. Overall, while Japan and the US saw declining shares of Australian exports over the period, China emerged as the largest export destination by 2012, with India also recording a small but steady rise. In 1990, Japan was Australia’s biggest export market by far, receiving 26% of its exports, but this figure fell gradually to 17% by 2012, despite remaining above the shares of the US and India. The US was the second-largest market in 1990, at 12%, before its share fluctuated and dropped to 6% by the end of the period, ending on a par with India. By contrast, China’s share of Australian exports surged from just 2% in 1990 to a peak of 28% in 2012, overtaking Japan around 2007 to become Australia’s top export destination. India, meanwhile, saw a modest increase from 1% to 5% over the 22-year period.

审题定位
该题为雅思学术类小作文动态折线图题,写作任务是概括1990-2012年澳大利亚对四个国家出口占比的变化,需要涵盖总体趋势、核心数据对比。
开头段
改写题目,明确图表内容(展示四国的澳大利亚出口占比、时间范围)。
概述段
提炼核心趋势——日美占比下滑,中国占比大幅上升成为最大出口市场,印度小幅增长,覆盖最核心的宏观特征。
第一段细节
描述下降的两个国家(日本、美国):日本起点最高(1990年26%),最终回落至17%,是初始最大市场但份额持续下滑;美国起点12%,波动下降到6%,和印度最终水平持平。
第二段细节
描述上升的两个国家(中国、印度):中国是增长最显著的国家,从初始仅2%飙升至2012年28%,在2007年左右超过日本成为第一大出口市场;印度仅小幅从1%增长至5%,整体占比始终偏低。
对比要点体现
明确对比了初始最高的日本和后来居上的中国的份额变化,对比了下滑类国家和上升类国家的相反趋势,也对比了中国大幅增长和印度小幅增长的差异,符合题目“相关处做对比”的要求,没有罗列所有零散数据,只选取了起点、终点、交叉点、极值等核心特征。